Comments on: Free “Mob” Sales Letter Critique http://bensettle.com/blog/free-mob-sales-letter-critique/ Easy, Ethical & Profitable Sales Tips For Serious Entrepreneurs Wed, 10 Mar 2010 04:12:22 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Ben Settle http://bensettle.com/blog/free-mob-sales-letter-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-568 Ben Settle Mon, 22 Dec 2008 07:14:22 +0000 http://bensettle.com/blog/?p=1036#comment-568 It works GREAT for articles. Although, sometimes overzealous editors (imagine that) at a certain popular ezine directory like to "edit" my articles when it suits their fancy because, I guess, they can't stand all those one or two sentence (sometimes even one or two word) paragraphs that make it easier for people to read than not to read. Ben<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('568','Ben Settle'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('568','Ben Settle','It works GREAT for articles.\r\n\r\nAlthough, sometimes overzealous editors (imagine that) at a certain popular ezine directory like to \"edit\" my articles when it suits their fancy because, I guess, they can\'t stand all those one or two sentence (sometimes even one or two word) paragraphs that make it easier for people to read than not to read.\r\n\r\nBen'); return false;">Quote</a></div> It works GREAT for articles.

Although, sometimes overzealous editors (imagine that) at a certain popular ezine directory like to “edit” my articles when it suits their fancy because, I guess, they can’t stand all those one or two sentence (sometimes even one or two word) paragraphs that make it easier for people to read than not to read.

Ben

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]]> By: Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru http://bensettle.com/blog/free-mob-sales-letter-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-567 Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru Mon, 22 Dec 2008 07:09:22 +0000 http://bensettle.com/blog/?p=1036#comment-567 I was just reading through your "private details" and noticed you even wrote that with invisible bullets - yeah, invisible bullets. I looked everywhere but I could find anything but short one or two sentence paragraphs. This made it very easy to scan and hit the highlights of the page. I thought - "What a great idea for articles!" I think I'll just throw out what I learned in business english.<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('567','Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('567','Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru','I was just reading through your \"private details\" and noticed you even wrote that with invisible bullets - yeah, invisible bullets. I looked everywhere but I could find anything but short one or two sentence paragraphs. This made it very easy to scan and hit the highlights of the page. I thought - \"What a great idea for articles!\" I think I\'ll just throw out what I learned in business english.'); return false;">Quote</a></div> I was just reading through your “private details” and noticed you even wrote that with invisible bullets – yeah, invisible bullets. I looked everywhere but I could find anything but short one or two sentence paragraphs. This made it very easy to scan and hit the highlights of the page. I thought – “What a great idea for articles!” I think I’ll just throw out what I learned in business english.
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]]> By: Ben Settle http://bensettle.com/blog/free-mob-sales-letter-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-566 Ben Settle Mon, 22 Dec 2008 07:02:25 +0000 http://bensettle.com/blog/?p=1036#comment-566 Hey Melody, thanks for stopping in. I love bullet points -- not sure how I'd even write ads with out them ;) Ben<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('566','Ben Settle'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('566','Ben Settle','Hey Melody, thanks for stopping in. I love bullet points -- not sure how I\'d even write ads with out them ;)\r\n\r\nBen'); return false;">Quote</a></div> Hey Melody, thanks for stopping in. I love bullet points — not sure how I’d even write ads with out them ;)

Ben

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]]> By: Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru http://bensettle.com/blog/free-mob-sales-letter-critique/comment-page-1/#comment-565 Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru Mon, 22 Dec 2008 06:56:34 +0000 http://bensettle.com/blog/?p=1036#comment-565 Comparing Bonnie and Clyde to copywriting...only you Ben! The bullets do make the copy easier for the eye to follow and grab the important points. Thanks for the reminder! Good suggestion over at www.TerryDean.org with the Rebill Nightmare. When I read the email I actually thought of a similar solution. Hey maybe I'm getting smart like you!<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('565','Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('565','Melody Campbell, The Small Business Guru','\r\nComparing Bonnie and Clyde to copywriting...only you Ben! \r\nThe bullets do make the copy easier for the eye to follow and grab the important points. \r\nThanks for the reminder!\r\nGood suggestion over at www.TerryDean.org with the Rebill Nightmare. When I read the email I actually thought of a similar solution. Hey maybe I\'m getting smart like you!'); return false;">Quote</a></div> Comparing Bonnie and Clyde to copywriting…only you Ben!
The bullets do make the copy easier for the eye to follow and grab the important points.
Thanks for the reminder!
Good suggestion over at http://www.TerryDean.org with the Rebill Nightmare. When I read the email I actually thought of a similar solution. Hey maybe I’m getting smart like you!
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