{"id":10046,"date":"2015-07-29T06:30:10","date_gmt":"2015-07-29T13:30:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=10046"},"modified":"2015-07-29T06:30:10","modified_gmt":"2015-07-29T13:30:10","slug":"elbenbo-teaches-subject-line-game","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/elbenbo-teaches-subject-line-game\/","title":{"rendered":"elBenbo Teaches Subject Line Game"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A cautionary tale:<\/p>\n<p>One of the perks &#8220;Email Players&#8221; subscribers get is, whenever I get\u00a0freelance copywriter opportunities sent to me, they&#8217;re the first to\u00a0know about them. And while most impress the wahoo out of these\u00a0clients and do elBenbo proud\u2026 there is one negative report I\u00a0sometimes get.<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s what I mean:<\/p>\n<p>A would-be client sends me what they need.<\/p>\n<p>I email the &#8220;Email Players&#8221; list.<\/p>\n<p>The freelancers on there then email the would-be client, but some\u00a0of the people emailing them are coming off as trying to be too\u00a0clever (which turns them off) and, at worst, looking like spammers.<\/p>\n<p>Take, for example, my ex-copywriting apprentice.<\/p>\n<p>She recently started her own copywriting agency.<\/p>\n<p>And few months back, I sent an email to the Email Playerhood about\u00a0how she&#8217;s looking for copywriters to work with and she sent me some\u00a0of the replies asking:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>&#8220;Why can\u2019t they just talk to me like a regular person? Why all the\u00a0copywriting drama and shenanigans?&#8221;<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>I shook my head.<\/p>\n<p>And, had no answer.<\/p>\n<p>She was getting all these subject lines and emails that sounded\u00a0like spam at a glance, as they tried to show how clever they are.\u00a0These subject lines *would* have worked great if sent to a list,\u00a0most likely. But to someone who is requesting specific info?<\/p>\n<p>Nah-boo.<\/p>\n<p>They just want to know what you can do for them.<\/p>\n<p>My ex-copywriting apprentice even said in a few cases she wanted to\u00a0hear from the writers and liked them, but almost thought they were\u00a0spam because of the clever and cute subject lines.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, like I said, a cautionary tale.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s all about context and awareness with subject lines.<\/p>\n<p>(Just like with sales letter headlines.)<\/p>\n<p>If you want to see a couple examples of how to respond to freelance\u00a0inquiries, check out the August &#8220;Email Players&#8221; issue where I show\u00a0you how to do it right (and some examples of what not to do).<\/p>\n<p>Methinks a lot of freelancers sabotage themselves.<\/p>\n<p>And, this is one way they do it.<\/p>\n<p>She goes to printer in a few days.<\/p>\n<p>Get your lovin&#8217; here:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.EmailPlayers.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">www.EmailPlayers.com<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A cautionary tale: One of the perks &#8220;Email Players&#8221; subscribers get is, whenever I get\u00a0freelance copywriter opportunities sent to me, they&#8217;re the first to\u00a0know about them. 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