{"id":1293,"date":"2008-12-27T09:21:12","date_gmt":"2008-12-27T09:21:12","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=1293"},"modified":"2008-12-27T09:21:12","modified_gmt":"2008-12-27T09:21:12","slug":"killer-swipe-file-kool-aid","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/killer-swipe-file-kool-aid\/","title":{"rendered":"Killer Swipe File Kool-Aid"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Got a funny <strong>swipe file<\/strong> story to share with you.<img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"\" src=\"http:\/\/www.bensettle.com\/images\/disturbing.jpg\"  style=\"border: 0px solid ; margin-left:20px; margin-bottom:20px; width: 413px; height: 386px; float: right;\"\/><\/p>\n<p>At least, I think it&#8217;s funny.<\/p>\n<p>Some people reading this &#8212; especially anyone who mindlessly swipes online sales letters &#8212; probably won&#8217;t find it funny.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, here&#8217;s what happened:<\/p>\n<p>Recently, a copywriter emailed me an ad he insisted I just &#8220;had to put in my swipe file&#8221; from some marketing dude (I&#8217;d never even heard of) who makes tens of zillions of dollars or whatever.<\/p>\n<p>So, being a sucker for stuff like this, I immediately read it.<\/p>\n<p>Holy shnikes this ad was amusing.<\/p>\n<p>It was packed top to bottom with one over-hyped claim after another &#8212; complete with exclamation points and all-cap letters.<\/p>\n<p>Paragraphs were interrupted by &#8220;speed bumps&#8221; &#8212; like empty, &#8220;Gee, I think you&#8217;re neat&#8221; testimonials and photo-shopped bank statements.  (They looked fake, but what do I know?)<\/p>\n<p>And there was no story, or logical flow of information, or even any respect for the reader.<\/p>\n<p>It actually kinda hurt my head (and probably my IQ) to read it.<\/p>\n<p>And yet, this is (I guess) considered &#8220;good copy.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>And what makes it &#8220;good copy&#8221; is (I guess) the fact the guy running it is a &#8220;guru&#8221; who&#8217;s supposedly rolls in the dough.<\/p>\n<p>Listen, I&#8217;m not &#8220;guru bashing&#8221; here (whatever that means).<\/p>\n<p>But there are people out there who really want &#8212; and NEED &#8212; to learn copywriting.  People who don&#8217;t have a lot of time to mess around.  People who are maybe a paycheck away from <em>starving<\/em> or who desperately want to become a full time copywriter.<\/p>\n<p>And if that&#8217;s you, then here&#8217;s some advice:<\/p>\n<p>Don&#8217;t be so quick to sip the swipe file &#8220;kool aid.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Just because an ad &#8220;raked in a millyun dollars&#8221; (on the Internet) doesn&#8217;t mean you should swipe it.<\/p>\n<p>In fact, 9 times out 10, not only would I NOT swipe most &#8220;million dollar&#8221; online sales letters&#8230; <\/p>\n<p><strong>&#8230; I&#8217;d ignore them, delete them and probably even BURN them.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>The wrong ones could literally set you back years.<\/p>\n<p>And, in many cases, their success has FAR more to do with being mailed to lists of people who will buy anything the marketer sells (some of these guys could put their <em>grocery lists<\/em> with an order button up and people&#8217;d buy from it), than the strength of the &#8220;copy.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>So what (or who) should you study, then?<\/p>\n<p>Personally, I dig the copywriting masters.<\/p>\n<p>Like <strong>Claude Hopkins<\/strong>, <strong>John Caples<\/strong>, <strong>Gary Bencivenga<\/strong>, <strong>Gary Halbert<\/strong>, <strong>David Deutsch<\/strong>, <strong>Doug D&#8217;Anna<\/strong>, <strong>Jim Rutz<\/strong>&#8230; and anyone whose copy competes (and wins) against other extremely talented copywriters head-to-head.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s easy to spot ads from these copywriters.<\/p>\n<p>They have a certain eloquence, charm and &#8220;depth&#8221; to them.<\/p>\n<p>There are no dorky sales tricks or &#8220;mind control tactics.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>And they talk to you intelligently &#8212; like you&#8217;re a rational thinking person &#8212; instead of like they think you belong on the &#8220;short bus&#8221; to school.<\/p>\n<p>But hey&#8230; don&#8217;t take my word for it.<\/p>\n<p>Check &#8217;em out for yourself.<\/p>\n<p>Last year I compiled a ton of ads like this (and websites where you can find them) in a <strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.BenSettle.com\/blog\/free-swipe-file\">swipe file<\/a><\/strong> report at:<\/p>\n<p><center><strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.BenSettle.com\/blog\/free-swipe-file\">www.BenSettle.com\/blog\/free-swipe-file<\/a><\/strong><\/center><\/p>\n<p>You won&#8217;t find many Internet sales letters in there.<\/p>\n<p>But you will find ads from some truly great copywriters.<\/p>\n<p>The kind of stuff (IMHO) you SHOULD study.<\/p>\n<p>Check it out today, it&#8217;s free.<\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n<p><big><big><center><strong>UPDATE:<\/strong><\/center><\/big><\/big><\/p>\n<p>Been getting a LOT of emails from people asking more or less the same question about my opinion of sales letters used in recent product launches.  So I should definitely clarify something:<\/p>\n<p>I think some of them are actually extremely good. (For example, unlike a lot of copywriters, I actually <em>liked<\/em> the Traffic Secrets 2.0 letter).  And I know of some that were originally good, but then mangled by some committee (happened to a copywriter friend of mine last year, very frustrating).  The point is not what &#8220;not&#8221; to study, but what &#8220;to&#8221; study.<\/p>\n<p>And if you can&#8217;t tell the difference, you should probably just stick with studying the &#8220;tried and true&#8221; <strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.BenSettle.com\/blog\/free-swipe-file\">copywriting masters<\/a><\/strong> until you can tell the difference. <\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;ll save you a lot of time, and keep you out of a lot of trouble.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Got a funny swipe file story to share with you. At least, I think it&#8217;s funny. Some people reading this &#8212; especially anyone who mindlessly swipes online sales letters &#8212; probably won&#8217;t find it funny. Anyway, here&#8217;s what happened: Recently, a copywriter emailed me an ad he insisted I just &#8220;had to put in my [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1293","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","category-copywriting-and-sales-letters"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1293","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1293"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1293\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1293"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1293"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1293"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}