{"id":16784,"date":"2024-08-27T01:38:49","date_gmt":"2024-08-27T01:38:49","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=16784"},"modified":"2024-08-27T01:39:17","modified_gmt":"2024-08-27T01:39:17","slug":"the-almost-creepy-powerful-copywriting-secret-i-learned-from-a-lawyer","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/the-almost-creepy-powerful-copywriting-secret-i-learned-from-a-lawyer\/","title":{"rendered":"The almost creepy-powerful copywriting secret I learned from a lawyer"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Many years ago, I first had one of my sales letters reviewed for legal compliance.<\/p>\n<p>It was quite the education, too.<\/p>\n<p>In fact, while I am certainly no expert on the subject, and I very well may be wrong\u2026 going by what he told me, it\u2019s rather astounding how many sales letters \u2014 even by so-called world class copywriters with legal departments reviewing their copy \u2014 look like gigantic &#8220;fed bait&#8221; targets to me now.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, I quickly went to work fixing the compliance \u201choles\u201d in that ad.<\/p>\n<p>And, soon after that, I ran it. Then something interesting happened. Even though I thought for sure the changes I made to my sales letter to make it more compliant with its claims would have made its response significantly weaker\u2026 just the opposite happened.<\/p>\n<p>Response, engagement, and sales were way higher than expected.<\/p>\n<p>The quality of customer was also way higher than expected.<\/p>\n<p>And my knowledge of copywriting soared higher than expected, too.<\/p>\n<p>The reason?<\/p>\n<p>My theory is three fold:<\/p>\n<p>1. The more compliant my sales copy, the more believable it is.<\/p>\n<p>2. The more believable it is, the more likely it\u2019ll sell the skeptics.<\/p>\n<p>3. And the more it sells the skeptics, the more sales from the higher quality customers I tend to get \u2014 probably because skeptics are often a 2-5 x\u2019s bigger market segment than the hyper buyers sitting around in their moo-moos drawing welfare each month that are attracted to the screaming claim &amp; exclamation mark-ridden copy are. In fact, it was such a valuable experience I invested a pretty penny in having a bunch of my other various companies\u2019 sales letter analyzed a few months ago, and am having even more done today. I probably have invested nearly $20k in these reviews over the last 6 years or so, and it\u2019s always worth every penny.<\/p>\n<p>It could be that one the greatest copywriting \u201chacks\u201d is having it legally compliant\u2026<\/p>\n<p>Something to think about.<\/p>\n<p>To learn more about the paid Email Players newsletter go here:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.bensettle.com\/alt\"><strong>www.EmailPlayers.com<\/strong><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Many years ago, I first had one of my sales letters reviewed for legal compliance. It was quite the education, too. 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