{"id":2603,"date":"2009-11-09T08:06:29","date_gmt":"2009-11-09T16:06:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=2603"},"modified":"2009-11-09T08:06:29","modified_gmt":"2009-11-09T16:06:29","slug":"5-ways-to-ruin-a-perfectly-good-sales-letter","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/5-ways-to-ruin-a-perfectly-good-sales-letter\/","title":{"rendered":"5 Ways To Ruin A Perfectly Good Sales Letter"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Got the bug to yap about sales letters today.<\/p>\n<p>Specifically, 5 &#8220;classic blunders&#8221; that, if you are doing them, could be causing you to leave some serious smackola on ye olde table.<\/p>\n<p>Here goes&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><strong>1. Removing The Proof<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Once upon a time I wrote an ad for a product created by a young marketing whiz chock-full of credibility, proof and reasons to buy.<\/p>\n<p>Yet, when the ad ran, the client <em>gutted<\/em> all the proof.<\/p>\n<p>Why?<\/p>\n<p>I have no idea.<\/p>\n<p>And while we&#8217;ll never know for sure, I&#8217;d bet they got a small fraction of the response they would have had they kept the proof in there.  <\/p>\n<p>Way I see it, if you must cut, cut the hype, not the credibility.<\/p>\n<p><strong>2.  Shorten For Sake Of Shortening<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Another classic blunder.<\/p>\n<p>Case in point:<\/p>\n<p>While back I wrote a sales letter over 16 pages long.  A few of those pages were story copy I thought maybe didn&#8217;t reeeeaaaally need to be there.  <\/p>\n<p>So we tested.<\/p>\n<p>The result?<\/p>\n<p>Let&#8217;s just say it was a very &#8220;short&#8221; test&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><strong>3.  Assuming Other Tests Apply To You<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s a big no-no.<\/p>\n<p>Just because (for example) a certain order button kicks buttocks for Marketer A, that doesn&#8217;t mean it&#8217;ll do diddly-squat for Marketer B&#8217;s unique product, prospects and other market-timing peculiarities.<\/p>\n<p><strong>4.  Thinking Writing Is Most Important<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s not.<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s kind of a bummer for some people (it always was for me), but that&#8217;s just the way it is.<\/p>\n<p><strong>5.  Listening To &#8220;Advertising Critics&#8221;<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t show my ads to a lot of copywriters or marketers.<\/p>\n<p>Why?<\/p>\n<p>Because to me, advertising critics are like movie critics.  <\/p>\n<p>And most movies that make a lot of moola tend to get <em>ripped<\/em> apart by the critics&#8230; while many movies that are slobbered over by critics are lucky to break even.<\/p>\n<p>In fact, want to know something funny?<\/p>\n<p>My longest running headline is FAR from &#8220;sexy.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>It sure as heck doesn&#8217;t look &#8220;cool&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>And yet, it&#8217;s been cleaning up for over a year &#8212; including as a stand-alone banner ad headline on super competitive sites like Drudge, NewsMax, WorldNetDaily, etc.<\/p>\n<p>So be careful of advertising critics.<\/p>\n<p>Including yours truly \ud83d\ude09<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, those are 5 ways to ruin a perfectly good sales letter.  For 122+ ways to instead BEEF UP your ads, pop on over to:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CopywritingGrabBag.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CopywritingGrabBag.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Got the bug to yap about sales letters today. Specifically, 5 &#8220;classic blunders&#8221; that, if you are doing them, could be causing you to leave some serious smackola on ye olde table. Here goes&#8230; 1. Removing The Proof Once upon a time I wrote an ad for a product created by a young marketing whiz [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2603","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","category-copywriting-and-sales-letters"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2603","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2603"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2603\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2603"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2603"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2603"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}