{"id":2947,"date":"2010-01-27T08:00:22","date_gmt":"2010-01-27T16:00:22","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=2947"},"modified":"2010-01-27T08:00:22","modified_gmt":"2010-01-27T16:00:22","slug":"when-using-proof-in-your-marketing-can-cripple-your-sales","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/when-using-proof-in-your-marketing-can-cripple-your-sales\/","title":{"rendered":"When Using Proof In Your Marketing Can Cripple Your Sales"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Let&#8217;s shake things up a little, shall we?<\/p>\n<p>Couple days ago I babbled about &#8220;The Matrix&#8221; and breaking rules.<\/p>\n<p>Remember that?<\/p>\n<p>Well, check out THESE apples:<\/p>\n<p>Not long ago a friend told me about an ad selling a &#8220;make money online&#8221; product (yeah, I know&#8230; yaaaaawn).  And they tested two versions.  One was full of screenshots &#8220;proving&#8221; their income using their super duper system, with some bullets, and an offer.  <\/p>\n<p>The other was just a story, same bullets and same offer.<\/p>\n<p>In other words, no fancy shmancy screen shots. No &#8220;proof&#8221; of income. And none of the bells &#038; whistles showing bank statements, PayPal accounts, and all that jazz.<\/p>\n<p>Which version won?<\/p>\n<p>Drum roll&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>The winner was the &#8220;plain Jane&#8221; version.<\/p>\n<p>Now, this ad broke a major &#8220;rule&#8221; (i.e. not using a bunch of proof) and yet it kicked rumpus when tested against the proof letter.<\/p>\n<p>What gives?<\/p>\n<p>Isn&#8217;t proof the &#8220;end all be all&#8221; in advertising?<\/p>\n<p>You bet your <em>underoos<\/em> it is.<\/p>\n<p>And smart marketers pack their ads with lots of proof and credibility elements (although personally, I rarely ever use the &#8220;usual suspect&#8221; kinds of proof anymore &#8212; like screenshots or testimonials, etc).<\/p>\n<p>But in this case, I guess the proof wasn&#8217;t in the pudding.   <\/p>\n<p>And, in fact, it got beaten to a pulp.<\/p>\n<p>Question is&#8230; <em>why<\/em>?<\/p>\n<p>Who knows?<\/p>\n<p>Mayhaps all the photoshopped bank statements looked phony.  Or maybe people just thought, &#8220;anyone can do a photoshop job, this is BS&#8221;.  Or maybe&#8230; just MAYBE&#8230; an irresistible story is more persuasive than flashing dry facts and figures?<\/p>\n<p>I guess we&#8217;ll never know for sure.<\/p>\n<p>But one thing is certain:<\/p>\n<p>Breaking rules can be very profitable.   <\/p>\n<p>And sometimes&#8230; the bigger the rule you <em>break<\/em>, the bigger the winner that breaks the <em>bank<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Giddy-up.<\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n<p><strong>P.S.<\/strong> If you want to learn how to tell stories that sell, check out the free sales story-telling bonus that comes with &#8220;Crackerjack Selling Secrets&#8221;:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CrackerjackSelling.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CrackerjackSelling.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Let&#8217;s shake things up a little, shall we? 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