{"id":33,"date":"2006-10-14T18:07:40","date_gmt":"2006-10-14T23:07:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=34"},"modified":"2006-10-14T18:07:40","modified_gmt":"2006-10-14T23:07:40","slug":"how-to-write-a-million-dollar-adwith-one-finger","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/how-to-write-a-million-dollar-adwith-one-finger\/","title":{"rendered":"How To Write A Million-Dollar Ad&#8230;With One Finger"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A couple weeks ago I got together with some local business owners to discuss the many &#8220;ins and outs&#8221; of marketing.<\/p>\n<p>Eventually, they started asking me about copywriting, and wanted to know what the biggest &#8220;secret&#8221; of copywriting was.<\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;It all comes down to your keyboard,&#8221;<\/em> I said.<em>  &#8220;There&#8217;s a special key on your keyboard that, if you learn to use it, will let you create great copy almost on demand.  Can you guess what it is?&#8221;<\/em> I asked.<\/p>\n<p>One of them said it was the exclamation mark.<\/p>\n<p>Another said it was the period.<\/p>\n<p>A couple people said the letter &#8220;f&#8221; (presumably for the word &#8220;free&#8221;).<\/p>\n<p>A few others said it was the space bar or &#8220;return&#8221; key.<\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;You&#8217;re all wrong.&#8221;<\/em>  I said.  <em>&#8220;The most important key on your keyboard for copywriting is the &#8216;delete&#8217; key.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s true.<\/p>\n<p>I bet more million dollar ads are &#8220;written&#8221; with the plain old delete key than any combination of letters or words combined.<\/p>\n<p>In fact, one of the best pieces of advice I ever got when I was starting out was,<em> &#8220;uh, Ben, this is great copy &#8212; but it&#8217;s way too &#8216;wordy.'&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p>And he was right.<\/p>\n<p>It was too wordy.  And we cut that 30-page monstrosity down to less than 20 pages&#8230;simply by deleting all the &#8220;fat&#8221; that really didn&#8217;t belong.<\/p>\n<p>Since then, I&#8217;ve been relentless with the delete key.<\/p>\n<p>You should, too.<\/p>\n<p>Even if it means cutting out your favorite parts and even if it kind of hurts a little to do so.<\/p>\n<p>This has always been one of the great &#8220;secrets&#8221; of copywriting.  <\/p>\n<p>And yet, it&#8217;s really no secret at all.  <\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s just common sense.<\/p>\n<p>If you cut all the &#8220;fat&#8221; from your ads they&#8217;ll read a thousand times faster, smoother and easier &#8212; and skyrocket your response every single time.<\/p>\n<p>So suck out those excess words and adjectives.<\/p>\n<p>Cut those long-winded sentences in half.<\/p>\n<p>Condense those 15 sentence paragraphs into one or two sentences that make the point.<\/p>\n<p>In other words&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Delete, delete, delete &#8212; until you&#8217;re left with only the words and ideas you need to make the sale.  With no meaningless tangents, irrelevant stories or bloated sentences in sight.<\/p>\n<p>And then&#8230; when you&#8217;re absolutely certain you got it &#8220;right&#8221;&#8230; put it away for a week or two (or longer, if you can).<\/p>\n<p>Then come back and cut it down even more.  <\/p>\n<p>After getting away from it, I guarantee you&#8217;ll see even more fat to cut out.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, to make sure you never forget this important lesson, always remember this:<\/p>\n<p><strong>When in doubt&#8230; delete it out.<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A couple weeks ago I got together with some local business owners to discuss the many &#8220;ins and outs&#8221; of marketing. 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