{"id":3431,"date":"2010-06-16T08:00:37","date_gmt":"2010-06-16T15:00:37","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=3431"},"modified":"2010-06-16T08:00:37","modified_gmt":"2010-06-16T15:00:37","slug":"shooting-down-the-copywriting-fanboys","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/shooting-down-the-copywriting-fanboys\/","title":{"rendered":"Shooting Down The Copywriting Fanboys"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Sometimes this gets me in trouble.<\/p>\n<p>Especially with the copywriting fanboys.<\/p>\n<p>But it&#8217;s my contention (and I&#8217;ve seen it happen) that a story can potentially carry the entire sale in an ad even if everything else is technically &#8220;wrong&#8221; (no clear call to action, confusing copy, weak headline, no offer, etc).<\/p>\n<p>Prove it, you say?<\/p>\n<p>Okay, how about these oranges:<\/p>\n<p>Back in 1986 a movie called &#8220;Top Gun&#8221; hit the theaters.  <\/p>\n<p>Top Gun is about a couple hotshot Naval pilots given a chance to train with the &#8220;best of the best&#8221; pilots in the world at the &#8220;Top Gun&#8221; fighter pilot school.  Now, whether you like Top Gun or not (I love it!), it was, in some ways, an extremely <em>profitable<\/em> &#8220;sales letter.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>How so?<\/p>\n<p>Couple reasons:<\/p>\n<p>First&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>After the movie hit the screens, Ray-Ban Aviator sunglasses (the kind Tom Cruise&#8217;s character &#8220;Maverick&#8221; wore) jumped 40%.  <\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s a HUGE increase.  <\/p>\n<p>And secondly&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Air Force and Navy recruitment (both sometimes very &#8220;hard sells&#8221;) shot through the <em>roof<\/em>.  <\/p>\n<p>Crazy, isn&#8217;t it?<\/p>\n<p>But apparently, the movie was so good at &#8220;selling&#8221; all the young whippersnappers of the day on how cool being a fighter pilot is, recruitment booths were set up inside many of the theaters it played in!<\/p>\n<p><strong>Hence, the selling POWER of stories.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>And of giving people a fun, thrilling ride.<\/p>\n<p>After all, there was nothing in the movie telling you to go buy Maverick&#8217;s brand of sunglasses or to join The Navy.  Yet, the movie &#8220;sold&#8221; great hordes of people on wanting to be like Maverick.  <\/p>\n<p>To live his exact lifestyle.<\/p>\n<p>And, yes, win over the hot babe at the end.<\/p>\n<p>So anyway, what about you?<\/p>\n<p>Would you like to tell stories that SELL like that?<\/p>\n<p>Then check out the next <strong><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CryptoMarketing.com\" rel=\"noopener\">Crypto Marketing Newsletter<\/a><\/strong> issue (that goes to print July 1), which is ALL about writing stories that sell in ads.<\/p>\n<p>You can subscribe over yonder at:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CryptoMarketing.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CryptoMarketing.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>See ya on the other side, Maverick&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Sometimes this gets me in trouble. Especially with the copywriting fanboys. 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