{"id":3593,"date":"2010-07-20T00:00:17","date_gmt":"2010-07-20T07:00:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=3593"},"modified":"2010-07-20T00:00:17","modified_gmt":"2010-07-20T07:00:17","slug":"sales-letters-that-shoot-blanks","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/sales-letters-that-shoot-blanks\/","title":{"rendered":"Sales Letters That Shoot Blanks"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Bam! Bam! Bam!<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s the sound of your ad <em>killing<\/em> your competitor&#8217;s ad.<\/p>\n<p>Well, that is, if you know how to use bullets.<\/p>\n<p>Sadly, most people don&#8217;t (even if they think they do).  And, in many cases, do more HARM than good to their sales when using bullets in their ads<\/p>\n<p>Like, for example&#8230;<\/p>\n<ul>\n1.  Making them all start with &#8220;how to&#8221; (zero variety)<\/p>\n<p>2.  Overpowering the reader with only straight benefit bullets &#8212; with no tease, mystery or romance<\/p>\n<p>3.  Being TOO clever (and thus, too confusing)<\/p>\n<p>4.  No strategy in <em>placing<\/em> them (every single one of my bullets is where it&#8217;s at for a reason, are yours?)<\/p>\n<p>5.  Not writing <em>enough<\/em> bullets <\/p>\n<p>6.  Not being aware of the aesthetics of a good bullet (don&#8217;t worry, I&#8217;m not getting artsy-fartsy on you here, but there&#8217;s something to be said for spacing bullets so they enhance the ones around it) <\/p>\n<p>7.  No curiosity factor <\/p>\n<p>8.  Too <em>boring<\/em> (no fun or adventure reading them)<\/ul>\n<p>Anyway, here&#8217;s the sad truth:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Most ads shoot <em>blanks<\/em>, not bullets.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>And that&#8217;s why, if you did nothing but avoid the amateur mistakes above in YOUR bullets, I&#8217;d bet someone else&#8217;s money you&#8217;d find a nice little boost in ye olde profits.<\/p>\n<p>Oh, and don&#8217;t forget&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>The next <strong><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CryptoMarketing.com\" rel=\"noopener\">Crypto Marketing Newsletter<\/a><\/strong> is ALL about bullets &#8212; including many ways I&#8217;ve never revealed before.  (Not even in my copywriting book.)<\/p>\n<p>You can still subscribe in time at:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CryptoMarketing.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CryptoMarketing.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Bam! Bam! Bam! That&#8217;s the sound of your ad killing your competitor&#8217;s ad. Well, that is, if you know how to use bullets. Sadly, most people don&#8217;t (even if they think they do). And, in many cases, do more HARM than good to their sales when using bullets in their ads Like, for example&#8230; 1. 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