{"id":4257,"date":"2011-04-06T01:00:35","date_gmt":"2011-04-06T08:00:35","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=4257"},"modified":"2011-04-06T01:00:35","modified_gmt":"2011-04-06T08:00:35","slug":"praying-for-the-end-of-a-sales-letter","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/praying-for-the-end-of-a-sales-letter\/","title":{"rendered":"Praying For The End Of A Sales Letter"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s funny how people still haggle over long copy.<\/p>\n<p>They think &#8220;Web 2.0&#8221; has changed the need for people to want all the facts and details about a product before buying (especially when selling to an ice cold prospect).  Or to hear a story they can step inside and relate to.  Or simply to bond with he or she who is selling to them in the first place.<\/p>\n<p>Long copy isn&#8217;t <em>always<\/em> best, of course.<\/p>\n<p>But sometimes it&#8217;s necessary for maximum sales.<\/p>\n<p>Take telling a story, for example.<\/p>\n<p>Ever hear of the musician Meat Loaf?<\/p>\n<p>He has a song that sold like gangbusters almost 10 minutes long!<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s called &#8220;Paradise On The Dashboard Light.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>And it&#8217;s just one LONG story.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s about this 17 year old whipper-snapper who&#8217;s in the car with his girlfriend, he wants her to &#8220;give up the goods&#8221;, but she refuses unless he promises to love her for the rest of their lives.<\/p>\n<p>At first, young Meat Loaf resists.<\/p>\n<p>He even tries getting her to agree to let him decide later (haha).<\/p>\n<p>But she refuses and makes him decide NOW.<\/p>\n<p>Finally, in all his teenage hormonal angst&#8230; he gives in!  He promises to love her and marry her and be with her forever, and swears to God and on his mother&#8217;s grave he&#8217;ll love her until the end of time.<\/p>\n<p>Then, after she&#8217;s given up the goods&#8230; he has regrets!<\/p>\n<p>He can&#8217;t stand her anymore.<\/p>\n<p>But, do to his promise, he can&#8217;t leave.<\/p>\n<p>And so&#8230; he starts praying for the end of time&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, it&#8217;s a <em>long<\/em> song.<\/p>\n<p>And, at the time, made big album sales.<\/p>\n<p>Thus, the power of stories.<\/p>\n<p>And that&#8217;s why, if you&#8217;re not using stories in your ads, emails, articles, videos, whatever you market with&#8230; you could be missing out on a lot of sales.  If you want to learn how to tell stories in your ads, then check out the new (and improved) &#8220;Copywriting Grab Bag&#8221;:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.CopywritingGrabBag.com\">www.CopywritingGrabBag.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It covers several ways to tell stories.<\/p>\n<p>But not just any stories.<\/p>\n<p>Stories designed to sell.<\/p>\n<p>Profit ye from them.<\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s funny how people still haggle over long copy. They think &#8220;Web 2.0&#8221; has changed the need for people to want all the facts and details about a product before buying (especially when selling to an ice cold prospect). Or to hear a story they can step inside and relate to. 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