{"id":4432,"date":"2011-05-31T06:00:26","date_gmt":"2011-05-31T13:00:26","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=4432"},"modified":"2011-05-31T06:00:26","modified_gmt":"2011-05-31T13:00:26","slug":"editing-sales-letters-with-your-tongue","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/editing-sales-letters-with-your-tongue\/","title":{"rendered":"Editing Sales Letters With Your Tongue"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Got this question recently&#8230;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>&#8220;Ben is it really necessary to read my sales letters out loud?? why can&#8217;t I just read silently since that is what my readers are doing??&#8221;<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>There are many reasons.<\/p>\n<p>One of which is obviously catching errors.<\/p>\n<p>For example:<\/p>\n<p>Just last week I was editing a 28 page (ugh!) sales letter and read it silently several times.  Then I started reading it out loud.  Usually I like to do so 10 times, but time was of the essence so I could only do it 5 times.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, on reading #3 I caught a doozy.<\/p>\n<p>The word?<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;workalcoholic&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>(Instead of &#8220;workaholic&#8221;)<\/p>\n<p>Jinkies!<\/p>\n<p>I missed it on the &#8220;silent&#8221; readings and first 2 aloud ones.<\/p>\n<p>And here&#8217;s something else:<\/p>\n<p>I cannot explain it, but when tediously reading a sales letter out loud (in addition to annoying anyone within earshot) you will generate many more ad ideas, solutions and improvements than you would otherwise.<\/p>\n<p>Different ways of phrasing things pop up.<\/p>\n<p>New headlines appear in your mind.<\/p>\n<p>And you might even see whole sections that should be moved, eliminated or expanded upon.<\/p>\n<p>So there you go.<\/p>\n<p>Reason #1001 to read &#8217;em aloud.<\/p>\n<p>And you know what?<\/p>\n<p>Last year I wrote a series of 5 newsletters showing you how to write ads from scratch (one of which included my methodology for <em>editing<\/em> sales letters).<\/p>\n<p>Very important stuff.<\/p>\n<p>Today they&#8217;re in The Copywriting Grab Bag:<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CopywritingGrabBag.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CopywritingGrabBag.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n<p><strong>P.S.<\/strong> You can also get them by subscribing to the Crypto Marketing Newsletter and purchasing the May-September 2010 back issues (for sale only to subscribers):<\/p>\n<p><strong><\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\"><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.CryptoMarketing.com\" rel=\"noopener\">www.CryptoMarketing.com<\/a><\/div>\n<p><\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Got this question recently&#8230; &#8220;Ben is it really necessary to read my sales letters out loud?? why can&#8217;t I just read silently since that is what my readers are doing??&#8221; There are many reasons. One of which is obviously catching errors. For example: Just last week I was editing a 28 page (ugh!) sales letter [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[8],"tags":[],"class_list":{"0":"post-4432","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","6":"category-copywriting-and-sales-letters"},"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4432","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=4432"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4432\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=4432"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=4432"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=4432"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}