{"id":8578,"date":"2015-05-14T06:30:27","date_gmt":"2015-05-14T13:30:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/?p=8578"},"modified":"2015-05-14T06:30:27","modified_gmt":"2015-05-14T13:30:27","slug":"guess-which-one-of-these-headlines-did-best","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/guess-which-one-of-these-headlines-did-best\/","title":{"rendered":"Guess Which One Of These Headlines Did Best"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Let&#8217;s have an informal little &#8220;contest.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Which of these 3 headlines do you think did best:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">1. &#8220;How To Get Rich Slowly&#8221;<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">2. &#8220;Can India Stop China&#8221;<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">3. &#8220;5687 Ira Road, Bath, Ohio 44210&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>The advertising critics would say:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>These all suck! There&#8217;s no benefit! Who wants to get rich slowly?\u00a0Who cares if India stops China! A mailing address? Are you f&#8211;ing\u00a0kidding me, Ben???<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>And (as usual) the advertising critics would be wrong.<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s why:<\/p>\n<p>The first headline was written by Gary Bencivenga. (Universally acknowledged as the world&#8217;s greatest living\u00a0copywriter.) And, he had to fight tooth and nail to get the client to run it.<\/p>\n<p>But, guess what?<\/p>\n<p>When it ran, it absolutely CRUSHED it in sales.<\/p>\n<p>Same with the second headline.<\/p>\n<p>It was for a control written by Doug D&#8217;Anna.<\/p>\n<p>(One of the top direct mail copywriters on the planet.)<\/p>\n<p>And the third one?<\/p>\n<p>Just a mailing address?<\/p>\n<p>Well, I don&#8217;t know if that was really the &#8220;headline&#8221; because, you\u00a0see, there was no real headline. Just a return address at the top\u00a0right corner. But, it was on the &#8220;most mailed&#8221; sales letter in\u00a0human history written by the late &#8220;grand puba&#8221; of marketing himself\u00a0&#8212; Gary Halbert.<\/p>\n<p>Yes, it&#8217;s true, my little droogie.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>The most mailed sales letter in history lacked a &#8220;killer&#8221; headline<\/strong><\/span>.<\/p>\n<p>Or, even a headline at all.<\/p>\n<p>(BTW, some say the famous Wall Street Journal control ad mailed to\u00a0more people, but it just so happens that letter lacked a headline,\u00a0too&#8230;)<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, what&#8217;s the point?<\/p>\n<p>Where&#8217;s this coming from?<\/p>\n<p>Why bring this up?<\/p>\n<p>Because some dude once\u00a0sent me an email saying the\u00a0headline selling the &#8220;Email Players&#8221; newsletter (and I quote)\u00a0&#8220;sucks balls&#8221;, without bothering to gather the facts about how it&#8217;s\u00a0been working.<\/p>\n<p>And, methinks a few hints are in order:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><strong>Hint #1:<\/strong> It&#8217;s been doing just fine for almost 4 years<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><strong>Hint #2:<\/strong> It has to do with market awareness &amp; who I&#8217;m targeting<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><strong>Hint #3:<\/strong> Emails ARE the new headlines (which I will explain more\u00a0about in a future &#8220;Email Players&#8221; issue &#8212; for now, I will say that\u00a0when I discovered this, it changed the entire game for me and shot\u00a0my sales through the roof)<\/p>\n<p>I could go on.<\/p>\n<p>But, I think you get the point.<\/p>\n<p>And, hopefully so do the advertising critics.<\/p>\n<p>Subscribe to &#8220;Email Players&#8221; here:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.EmailPlayers.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>www.EmailPlayers.com<\/strong><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Ben Settle<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Let&#8217;s have an informal little &#8220;contest.&#8221; Which of these 3 headlines do you think did best: 1. &#8220;How To Get Rich Slowly&#8221; 2. &#8220;Can India Stop China&#8221; 3. &#8220;5687 Ira Road, Bath, Ohio 44210&#8221; The advertising critics would say: These all suck! There&#8217;s no benefit! Who wants to get rich slowly?\u00a0Who cares if India stops [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,9],"tags":[],"class_list":{"0":"post-8578","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","6":"category-copywriting-and-sales-letters","7":"category-email-marketing"},"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8578","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=8578"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8578\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=8578"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=8578"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/bensettle.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=8578"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}