How Master Copywriters “Think”

Well my friends, it’s time to rumble with some more Q&A.

I’ve been getting a LOT of great questions everyone can benefit from.

Let’s hit it…


QUESTION:
I would love to see some deep analysis of proven ads broken down line by line like Eugene Schwartz does in his book Breakthrough Advertising. Do you have any plans to do that?

BEN: No plans on my end.

But you can get a GREAT Ken McCarthy analysis of one of the longest running control letters in the history of direct marketing at:

www.kenmccarthy.com/blog/?p=72

Peter Stone also recently posted an invaluable sales letter critique on his blog at:

www.peterstonecopy.typepad.com/peter_stone/2007/06/what_a_video_cr.html

Both Ken’s and Peter’s teachings are “must reading” for anyone wanting to become a better copywriter.

In fact, they contain so much “for real” advanced copywriting information you can go to them over and over again and learn something new each time. (I know I have!)

Finally, Doug D’Anna recently told me he’ll soon be offering his entire 20 years of winning and test promotions to his “A-list” members.

He’s also including a written analysis of why each one worked or failed — along with the lessons you can take away from them.

So make sure you sign up for his free “A List” ASAP.


QUESTION:
Ben, do you take on clients? You have no links to info on your site about this???

BEN: If you have a product or service that’s both interesting and legitimately valuable then maybe.

It just depends on what I have going on at any given time.

Anyone interested in my copywriting services can find out more information at:

www.BenSettle.com/blog/copywriting-services


QUESTION:
Do you have any tips on how to write fluidly and clearly?

BEN: Yeah… write, write, write, write, WRITE!

If you want to be a good writer you have to write a lot.

I started by mindlessly copying Gary Halbert ads and newsletters over and over and over. And that did wonders for me.

You can get all the Gary Halbert writings you can eat at:

www.thegaryhalbertletter.com

www.hardtofindads.com


QUESTION:
Do you have any advice on product package design?

BEN: If you suck at designing (like I do) then bite the bullet and outsource.

Just make sure you find someone who’s good at both designing and direct response marketing.

They’re not always easy to find.

But I promise you they’re well worth the effort (and price).


QUESTION:
I’m new in my market and I have no testimonials, track record or credentials, etc. What can I do to stick out?

BEN: A couple things you can try include:

1. Lots of “pre-selling” that demonstrates your knowledge and expertise before the prospect reads a word of your sales letter.

You can do this with free reports, articles, videos, audios, case studies (when you get some), etc.

2. “Out-fascinate” your competition with tantalizing bullets.

In other words, create a LOT of bullets that make people say, “how in the world does THAT work?!” Or, “How is that even possible???”

It’s hard to imagine, but people really do buy products (even very expensive products) because of one single bullet point that hits ‘em where it counts.

IMHO, the undisputed world heavy-weight champion bullet point teacher is Ken McCarthy.

Instead of just handing you a pile of bullets to study and copy by hand, he actually shows you how to build hot bullet points from the ground up — from scratch.

There’s a reason why guys like Gary Bencivenga and Dan Kennedy praise Ken’s ads as examples of world-class copywriting.

His unique way of constructing bullets may be one of those reasons.

Okay, one more question before we wrap up.


QUESTION:
I have a website where I sell a bunch of books on the same topic. My books are all on similar subjects and complement each other. Do you have any quick tips on how I can get customers to buy more than one book at a time?

BEN: Try including a snatch of copy that says:

“Be sure to put all the books that look interesting into your cart as you go. It is easier and quicker to simply delete them from the cart later than trying to find them again.”

I know that sounds almost too simple.

But you’d be amazed at how much “simple” things can impact your sales.

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Okay, that’s it for now.

See you next time!

Remote Control Swipe File – Part 2

Since that “Remote Control Swipe File” post a while back, I’ve been getting flooded with requests for more.

Not being one who likes to disappoint you… I’m giving you 5 more not-so-easy-to-get ads to enjoy and learn from.

Ready?

Okay then, let’s roll:

1. Joe Karbo’s “Lazy Man’s Way To Riches” Ad

This one is a true classic — and one of the only full page newspaper ads selling a “how to make money” book to ever turn a profit during its day:

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/Karbo.pdf


2. Ben Suarez’s “Astrology Today” Ad

This is an excellent example of a “disguised” ad — that looks (at first glance) much more like an interesting article than an ad.

This is also one of the 9 ads Gary Halbert told his son to copy out by hand and study in “The Boron Letters.”

Here it is, yours for the taking:

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/swipe-astrology-today.pdf

And here is another version of it:

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/swipe-astrologytoday.pdf


3. Little Black Book “Bottom Line” Ad

This is a little book I got for free about 11 years ago when I subscribed to Men’s Fitness magazine.

The entire book is a mixture of great content and sales pitches.

This scan is the beginning of the book which tries to “butter” you up to buy Bottom Line/Personal.

I can’t imagine anyone not getting an enormous amount of value from reading it.

Check it out at:

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/swipe-blackbook.pdf


4. Bruce Barton’s “The Book Nobody Knows” Ad

Everything I’ve read about Bruce Barton just blows me away.

This guy was a master at writing tight, persuasive copy that made people buy.

This ad he wrote for his book “The Book Nobody Knows” is just one example.

Honestly now… how can you read this short, intriguing little ad and NOT want to get his book?

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/swipe-booknobodyknows.jpg


5. Mike Marvel “Dynaflex” Ad

This is the ad that really taught me the value appealing to people’s sense of insecurity.

The copy sounds kind of dorky today.

But this ad (and many others like it) sold scads of bodybuilding books and products in the back of comic books.

Take a gander at it and you’ll see why:

http://www.bensettle.com/Swipe-File/swipe-mikemarvel.jpg

Okey-dokey.

That’ll do it for today.

Until next time…

Copywriting Slang Swipe File

Once upon a time, I saw a Tex Avery cartoon titled “Symphony In Slang.”

This short little cartoon was almost entirely in slang (thus the title). When I started studying copywriting and learned the value of using slang in my ads, I looked everywhere for it. I checked video stores, combed the Cartoon Network website and scoured the Internet.

Nada.

There were a few sites in the search engines that had it. But when I clicked on the links I’d find it was yanked offline for copyright violations or because the url had changed.

Tonight I finally found it.

And yep… it was sitting there on good ol’ Youtube.

You can watch it (while it’s still up) on YouTube just by typing in the title name in their search engine.

I suspect it won’t be up long, though.

So in case you’re reading this and it’s gone… I went through it (for your benefit and mine) and extracted all the relevant slang terms. Depending on what you sell, some of this stuff may be kind of hard to work into your story copy.

But much of it can still be adapted for a variety of products and services.

For example, you could treat some of them like “formula headlines” — where you substitute one or more words with words that fit with the story you’re telling in your copy. At the very least they should spark some useful ideas you can use.

Anyway, I was pretty excited when I found this cartoon.

I hope you get as much value out of it as I have.

Slang Swipe File

born with a silver spoon in your mouth

grew up overnight

up at the crack of dawn

back to my hole in the wall

beside myself with anger

make some dough

beautiful girl stepped into the picture

I got goose pimples

clothes fit her like a glove

paintin’ the town red

let her hair down

she ate like a horse

my money was runnin’ out on me

left me in a pickle

I gave him the slip

he drew a gun on me

the law was on my heels

the judge tried to pump me

put my foot in my mouth

sent me up the river

felt myself going to pot

raised a big stink

going though a lot of red tape

threw myself at her feet

got on her high horse

couldn’t touch her with a ten foot pole

guess the cat had her tongue

after that I went to pieces

we chewed the rag a while

I heard from the grapevine

that burned me up

knew he was just feeding her a line

the guy spent his money like water

outside it was raining cats and dogs

I was feeling mighty blue… and everything looked black

a tear ran down my cheek

hot footed it over to Mary’s apartment

I died laughin’

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For a ton more swipe file lessons (including a huge swipe file I personally use to get ideas for my own ads and sales letters), hot foot it over to…